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Amit Charles's avatar

'You who say apart

is the best part of

love because space

is where song rises

and what can sex

do that music can

not do a thousand

times better deeper

longer faster lighter

all at once all night "

That mic drop moment, when you realise it's not a mic but a dynamite. Phew!

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Shannan Mann's avatar

Thanks Amit!

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How to Love the World's avatar

dig it!

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Shannan Mann's avatar

💙💙

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phạm gia hân's avatar

loving this as somebody who's closing the distance with their LD partner soon🥹

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Shubham Upman's avatar

'I wish I had more

body parts to take

pictures for you' - I love how silly and inane you got with this poem

And the ending was artful. This is such a unique poem, we don't come across generally. 👏👏

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Il Cerchio Perfetto's avatar

Looks like a Pixies song

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lchristopher's avatar

Vox - Nicholson Baker.

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Disposable Poetry's avatar

Great stuff 😁

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Jordan Marcum's avatar

what a gift, to have that

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Anni's avatar

Thank you for providing the world with this beautiful, intimate, sensual experience. You have a fine skill with words. 🙏💛

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Caroline Beuley's avatar

Love your poetry!

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Rivers + Robots's avatar

I'm kind of specific (I don't know how else to be) about what hits me. This did. You nailed it.

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Gary Michael Dault's avatar

Yeh, well. GMD

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Marko Capoferri's avatar

Damn. That’s all.

(have you read Keetje Kuipers’ newest collection? a lot of those poems make me blush, too)

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