15 Comments
User's avatar
Amit Charles's avatar

'You who say apart

is the best part of

love because space

is where song rises

and what can sex

do that music can

not do a thousand

times better deeper

longer faster lighter

all at once all night "

That mic drop moment, when you realise it's not a mic but a dynamite. Phew!

Shannan Mann's avatar

Thanks Amit!

phạm gia hân's avatar

loving this as somebody who's closing the distance with their LD partner soon🥹

Shubham Upman's avatar

'I wish I had more

body parts to take

pictures for you' - I love how silly and inane you got with this poem

And the ending was artful. This is such a unique poem, we don't come across generally. 👏👏

Il Cerchio Perfetto's avatar

Looks like a Pixies song

lchristopher's avatar

Vox - Nicholson Baker.

Jordan Marcum's avatar

what a gift, to have that

Anni's avatar

Thank you for providing the world with this beautiful, intimate, sensual experience. You have a fine skill with words. 🙏💛

Rivers + Robots's avatar

I'm kind of specific (I don't know how else to be) about what hits me. This did. You nailed it.

Marko Capoferri's avatar

Damn. That’s all.

(have you read Keetje Kuipers’ newest collection? a lot of those poems make me blush, too)