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akaexcvvvte's avatar

I love the symbolism drenched descriptions. The emotions being described in this are very powerful and border on a manic sort of forlorn psychosis that I often find difficult to convey in writing. I love it!

Shannan Mann's avatar

Thank you Ryan! This means a lot 💙

Cypherspace's avatar

Beautiful 💜

Michael Drummond's avatar

Really great work here

Dick Westheimer's avatar

It's a good day for me to read a Shannan Mann ghazal.

Cynthia R. Pratt's avatar

Wow! I don’t logically follow the gist of this because it’s so surreal, but I think I don’t need to understand, but rather just feel the energy of the words which keeps punching the reader to react at each stanza.